Definite improvements.
I remember the first time you submitted Mcfrog's dance on NG. I'd made a comment on the need for a storyline or at least plot and you'd responded with the concern you didn't know how to come up with one. My advice to you is this. Think of a simple situation and then go from there. You've got the talent to do whatever you want so be creative. McFrog seems indestructible, and yet a nice, but clumsy guy. Go with that! Say, have him try to ask out that girl from before the building jump scene. Gets grabbed my king kong sized panda (since you incorporated one into this film)....get the picture. Look forward to seeing where you take this.